what if? feedback

Many things were said about how realistic my idea is, and it was very understandable. Ms Roberts said that people from different times could interperate it differently, for example nuclear war, pollution, or many other things. I think I should make obvious that air pollution is effecting everyone and not just the people that live near power plants, so I am unsure whether to include a powerplant in the background or not.

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Nature word drawings

For my project I chose to use the word mediate and divide my project in half with one side nature and the other industrialization. The feedback I have so far is that i have a really good choice of word to go along with my picture. They also said that they really like the detail on my tree, which I am really happy about because it took so long. Overall my peers liked my plan.

Blindfolded Drawings

When i first heard the directions for these drawings I thought of all the places in my memory that I could include in the drawing. The one place that i knew i had to draw about is my grandparents beach house in Belfair, WA. I knew that including all of the details of this place would not be possible because there are so many different shapes lines and small details that need to be included. I think that the blindfold made it harder to picture the beach house because through the parts that I had already drawn I would have a better idea of the things that needed to be included. The way i went about drawing with the blindfold was much different than how i normally draw. with the blindfold on it was hard to get detail and the many small objects that would normally be included. Instead of small designs and detail, I drew basic shapes and lines to try to get the bare bones of the beach house. My drawing that I did with a blindfold was different from how i normally would do it, but it was not definetly a bad thing.